Email course #8: Exercise - Redrafting an email #1
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Now that we've covered all the main points that you must be aware of, let's look at an email that seems to look OK but really needs to be redrafted.
Here's the email text if you would like to copy and paste and correct the email:
Dear Mr Simon
Our previous email of the 23rd May said that some invoices that we sent to you haven’t been paid. The invoices were those for May, June and July 2019 for the purchases you made for printer ink and other office supplies. It would be wonderful if we could receive the payment.
KR
Brian Brown
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The email course:
Introduction: How do you write successful emails? • Email course: Introduction - how do y...
#1: Why are you writing an email? • Email course #1: Why are you writing ...
#2: Salutations • Email course #2: Salutations (how do ...
#3: Telling the reader why you are writing • Email course #3: Telling the reader w...
#4: Present information and data that is needed • Email course #4: Present information ...
#5: A call to action • Email course #5: A call to action
#6: Offer to help & closing your email • Email course #6: Offer to help & clos...
#7: The subject line • Email course #7: The subject line
#8: Redrafting an email #1 • Email course #8: Exercise - Redraftin...
#9: Redrafting an email #2 • Email course #9: Redrafting an email #2
#10: Final comments • Email course #10: Final comments
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