Email course #9: Redrafting an email #2
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This is another email that despite looking OK, also really needs to be redrafted while putting into practice what we've learnt so far.
Email text to be changed:
Dear Sir
Your response to our request for further information is still awaited and the deadline for the project is fast approaching. The information includes financial statements for 2017-2019 and the documents we highlighted in last months email. I would appreciate your prompt response in this matter.
BR
Brian Brown
If you have any questions or comments, please don't hesitate to write in the comments section below!
The email course:
Introduction: How do you write successful emails? • Email course: Introduction - how do y...
#1: Why are you writing an email? • Email course #1: Why are you writing ...
#2: Salutations • Email course #2: Salutations (how do ...
#3: Telling the reader why you are writing • Email course #3: Telling the reader w...
#4: Present information and data that is needed • Email course #4: Present information ...
#5: A call to action • Email course #5: A call to action
#6: Offer to help & closing your email • Email course #6: Offer to help & clos...
#7: The subject line • Email course #7: The subject line
#8: Redrafting an email #1 • Email course #8: Exercise - Redraftin...
#9: Redrafting an email #2 • Email course #9: Redrafting an email #2
#10: Final comments • Email course #10: Final comments
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